Written By Samantha Gibbons, Age 16
Arizona, USA
A heavy stomp penetrated upon our chests
Predominance against the fearless, yet they play the victims
The repetitive hypocrisy and endless privilege;
Repulsive presentiment towards those who are ignorant
Look left, look right
The blistering sun strikes the skin of continual drudgery,
Whereas it has another angle of the selfish complexion
Look up, look down
It was never proven, they say
My heart palpitates;
I choke on my words
Lifelong friendships down the drain
A light of hope lingers from the cloudy skies,
Happiness is peaking through the redundant smiles
The trees dance blissfully to the song of the wind
I will never forget your paradigm among the undivided.
Author’s Analyzation
Among the Undivided is a political poem written primarily to illustrate the effects
of opposing parties regarding socialistic aspects. It is divided into four stanzas to
separate four ideas: the recent presidential election, the political divisions in
neighborhoods, political conversations that cause friendships to deteriorate, and the
sociological outcomes that result from the election. I initially wrote this poem so that it
suited my personal experience, however, it can be interpreted in numerous ways.
Furthermore, there are symbols that appear throughout the poem that I would like to
address for a better understanding.
The phrase “a heavy stomp” (stanza 1, line 1) refers to the political symbol of the
Republican party, being an elephant. I specifically used that to convey the message of
how the Republicans treated the minority groups within America; stomping on them
and putting unnecessary weight on their chest of inferiority. The hypocrisy between
controversial issues become apparent in political conversations. The wealthy live in
their own utopian bubble and continue living their lives as though the world revolves
around them, disregarding the lives of minorities. The saying “ignorance is bliss” is the
epitome of the privileged lifestyle and thriving off of what a capitalistic society has to
offer.
In the specific neighborhood I live in, the tensions were higher than ever during
late October and early November. I would drive down the streets as I physically looked
in both directions, seeing a divided neighborhood. Not even exaggerating, the
representation for the two primary political candidates were split fifty-fifty. I vividly
remember seeing the hard-working actions of minorities in the houses of Republicans,
where the privileged would continue to go live their lives as though nothing affected
them. Specifically, in regards to the COVID-19 pandemic, I used the phrase “Look up,
look down” (stanza 2, line 4) to refer to me looking up and seeing the planes filled with
the privileged citizens going on their vacations. However, I would look down the road
and see people who are struggling to find opportunities to thrive in a safe environment
while simultaneously pondering how they will pay for healthcare if they do get sick.
From my personal experience, most of the Trump supporters who have civil
conversations with me always provoke the argument of “It was never proven”
concerning Trump’s actions and taxes. It was never proven that he had over fifteen
assault allegations, either (Desjardins). This year has been relatively difficult because
not only did the pandemic reveal people’s true colors, it also made me question who I
was friends with. I was shocked by the amount of ignorance I was surrounded by and
how the majority of people cannot form their own opinions, but primarily base them off
of their parents. There have been drastic effects on varying political views on my own
personal relationships, as I am sure on others as well.
Thankfully, Biden won because I could not stand another four years of prevailing
racism, prejudice, and discrimination within the United States. I feel as though I have
put on a fake smile for the past four years, but now true happiness is projected when I
do smile. Not because I think everything is resolved, but we took one step in the right
direction. Nonetheless, I will never forget the way that people acted during these
unprecedented times. There will never be an excuse for the actions people took in
attempts to exemplify nationalism to an extreme extent.
Works Cited
Desjardins, Lisa. “All the Assault Allegations against Donald Trump, Recapped.” PBS,
Public Broadcasting Service, 14 Oct. 2016,
www.pbs.org/newshour/politics/assault-allegations-donald-trump-recapped.
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